Z was offering good advice. Read what you have written. Look at the spelling. We're not talking "Mississipi" here, we're talking basic stuff. The occasional full stop / capital letter wouldn't go amiss either. OR are going to see someone who does not pay attention to detail. Do you think they will employ someone who gives that impression? It may look like criticism to you but it is good advice.
There is a lot wrong with the above too.
For one the word "Mississipi" is not correct and two you have missed putting "you" after the OR.